tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7779997262227613456.post7430857994526256027..comments2024-03-23T02:57:31.362-07:00Comments on Authors, Kai Strand & LA Dragoni: April #InkRipples - Workshop on RevisionKai Strand, Authorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10012304963642303041noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7779997262227613456.post-6361795285381785722017-04-22T07:24:06.921-07:002017-04-22T07:24:06.921-07:00Ha ha. My upcoming time travel isn't as compli...Ha ha. My upcoming time travel isn't as complicated as most. I like to keep things simple ;) But even then I had to verify WHAT had happened to the characters up to THAT point in time. Kai Strand, Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10012304963642303041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7779997262227613456.post-23646206391067416902017-04-19T14:45:45.271-07:002017-04-19T14:45:45.271-07:00Yes! One of my editors was explaining how she uses...Yes! One of my editors was explaining how she uses the backwards technique. It's a great one if you ask me. And YES, there totally has to be a time outline--especially when messing with time. Whew! Glad to be done with that one. Best of wishes to you!Crystal Collierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03912469552483168148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7779997262227613456.post-74044026922844903592017-04-17T17:33:56.426-07:002017-04-17T17:33:56.426-07:00I do love calendars though, so maybe I should buy ...I do love calendars though, so maybe I should buy a new one for each book I write ;) <br /><br />Great rev on the blurb. Kai Strand, Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10012304963642303041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7779997262227613456.post-45417676103555700742017-04-17T17:32:05.493-07:002017-04-17T17:32:05.493-07:00That's funny because I generally don't enj...That's funny because I generally don't enjoy it at all. It's usually a chore for me. Kai Strand, Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10012304963642303041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7779997262227613456.post-720153347339359552017-04-17T12:17:55.199-07:002017-04-17T12:17:55.199-07:00More great tips, Kai. I've done #5 for my WIP....More great tips, Kai. I've done #5 for my WIP. #6 has caused me to back up a time or two to check. A timeline would have helped. :)<br />On your blurb:<br />Then life becomes complicated when Jory enters it. Lawson feels an immediate attraction to her from the first day she starts work at the brewery. It isn’t meant to be, however. (I think you can leave off the last sentence.) The rest looks okay. Good luck.Beverly Stowe McClurehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02176195451841801819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7779997262227613456.post-16320021634145472572017-04-17T10:57:25.436-07:002017-04-17T10:57:25.436-07:00I love making calendars and timelines for my mss. ...I love making calendars and timelines for my mss. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09816574953419131532noreply@blogger.com