10 Steps to Editing Your Novel by Melanie Hooyenga
Happy Friday! I'm really excited to have YA author, Melanie Hooyenga here to talk to us about her editing process. Ack! Editing is the bane of my existence and I'm thankful for all the tips I can get to make it a smoother process. So, click your fingers on your keyboard for a round of virtual applause to welcome Melanie to Strands of Thought!
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You did it! You
finished writing an ENTIRE NOVEL! Turn off your computer, read a
book—celebrate!
If you’ve ever
written a full-length manuscript you know what a monumental feat it is to
finally write those elusive words, The
End. I’ve written five
novels (plus one memoir that we don’t talk about) and typing those six little
letters never gets old.
Give yourself a week
off, then hunker down in your favorite chair because it’s time to work.
Everyone edits differently, and what works for me may not work for you, but
hopefully these tips will help you get through the dreaded phase of writing:
EDITING.
1: The First
Read
The first time you
read your manuscript, note where to make the changes you know need fixing, as
well as anything small, like typos. This might take a couple passes, but the
goal here is to read like a reader -- not an editor -- to catch the places that
need to be changed.
2: The Second
Read
Now go through more
slowly, taking time to fix plot inconsistencies, strengthen dialogue, and
restructure any scenes that don’t flow. This can take anywhere from a few days
to a couple weeks.
3: Send to Beta
Readers
Hopefully you’ve
already enlisted a crew of beta readers who are eager to shred your
masterpiece. This should include fellow writers, avid readers, and MAYBE a
family member or two (but only if they promise to be honest). Take a deep
breath and just hit send. But don’t send it to everyone at once—you’ll want to
save some for later drafts.
4: Cry (Kill
Your Darlings)
This part might
sting. Because we’re so close to our work, we can’t see the things that are
wrong with it—that’s why we enlist beta readers—and while they’ll love some
parts, there are others that just don’t work. Ultimately, it’s your decision
what you do with their input, but you’ll most likely have to say goodbye to a
favorite passage or twelve.
5: Send to More
Beta Readers
The anxiety you felt
the last time should be gone and now you’re excited to share your newly
improved manuscript with the next batch of readers.
6: Cry (Tears of
Joy This Time)
Hooray! The changes
you made in the last draft worked! The second group of readers found a few more
things that need changing, but you’re getting closer. Make those tweaks and...
7: Send to MORE
Beta Readers
I often resend the
final draft to one of my first readers so she can see how the story has
progressed with each round of revisions, as well as a small group of readers
who may not know proofreading, but know what works and what doesn’t (this could
be a good time for your Aunt Mildred).
8: Polish,
Polish, Polish
Now’s your last
chance to go through your manuscript with a fine-toothed comb. Try reading out
loud, reading from back to front, then normally one last time. Now you’re ready
to...
9: Submit
When your manuscript
was out with readers you should have researched agents or publishers and
compiled a list you’d like to query, as well as written and polished your query
letter (you should also run your letter by editor friends). Take a deep breath
and send to 3-5 agents on your list. Don’t send it to everyone at once—you may
need to tweak your query letter after the first round (does this sound
familiar?).
10: Celebrate
for Real
Some people save a
fancy bottle of wine. Others get a tattoo. Whatever you do, be sure you
celebrate your accomplishment. You’ve FINISHED a novel. Not just written a
novel, you’ve put it through the wringer, shed sweat and tears, eaten more than
your share of dark chocolate sea salt caramels (or maybe that’s just me),
neglected other responsibilities, all to get to this point where you can call
yourself a writer.
This process might
take more or less time, but hopefully this gives you an idea what to expect.
The main thing to remember is if you’re editing your novel, that means you’ve
FINISHED a novel, and that’s always something to celebrate.
Melanie
Hooyenga first started writing as a
teenager and finds she still relates best to that age group. Her young-adult
novel, FLICKER, debuted in November 2012, the sequel, FRACTURE, released in
June 2014, and the final book, FADED, will be published in June 2015. When not
at her day job as a graphic designer, you can find her attempting to wrangle my
Miniature Schnauzer Owen and playing every sport imaginable with her husband
Jeremy.
Yes, yes. Great points, Melanie. Edit, edit, edit. Send to those marvelous critique partners. They're so awesome. Thanks for reminding us.
ReplyDeleteI LOVE my critique partners!!!! Couldn't do it without you guys, Beverly!
DeleteThanks to you, fabulous crit partner, my manuscript, you knowm the one that keeps going on and on, is now complete. :)
DeleteYippee for you! I'm sure you are both happy and relieved. I'm SO glad you stuck with it. I love that story!
DeleteThanks Beverly. I'm glad you found this helpful. I love my crit partners too!
DeleteGreat advice Melanie! I am currently working on Editing/Revising now and I think I'm almost ready to send it to my beta readers. I like how you suggest having two different reading groups go over it at different times. Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteAmanda :D
I agree, Amanda - Melanie's suggestion of 2 groups is so smart. Thanks for stopping by.
DeleteI often have even more than that, but I definitely think you should save people for different drafts. I've had situations where I thought it was nearly complete, then one person pointed out something that completely flipped my edits on their ear.
DeleteGood luck!